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Do you still--

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think you got the best of me?
think again.

assume i'm still crying over glass pieces of my heart?
look again.

believe i'll never be the same again?
because i'll be better.

feel like i want you back?
just to show you how unbroken i am.

                                                      ---

think i need you like i used to?
think again.

assume that i'll still be waiting under a rainy sky with unread letters?
look again.

believe i'm only a reader who gave up writing for you?
because i'm better than before.

feel like i don't mean a word i say?
it's because you never knew me.

                                                      ---

think i still lie to feel better?
think again.

assume i'm heading towards another relapse like you?
              [if you have the nerve to]
look again.

believe i'll feel sorry for saying all of this?
not for someone i used to know.

feel like i'm still weak enough to hold this over you?
think again.
i know. i know.
i said i won't write. you can hit me later.

and i never meant to write sappy poetry i swear. it's just not my thing, i hate this, but someone might relate and that's why i'd like to know what you think of this. it's completely out of my usual style.

inspired by
    :bulletpurple: Somebody That I Used to Know by Gotye.
    :bulletpurple: Still I Rise by Maya Angelou.

^ this piece is an insult to this beautiful piece by Angelou but it inspired it. :shrug:

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PoorEccentric's avatar
I really relate with this. Normally I don't like poetry about emotions, but this was neither to soppy or too "Look, I'm so cool cause I cussed in a poem about an ex."

Now, I read in the description how this isn't what you normally write, and I will be checking out your other stuff because you must be good if you got me to like a poem.