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i was kissed by color before i was born

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i have a thing for butterflies -
           they were tattooed across my skin
           when i left my mother's womb.

they rest between my ribs
and the hollow of my throat
i was kissed with colors before i was born.

you were kissed by  h a p p i n e s s
and embraced by Eden -
so you could find refuge
in the color under my skin.

instead of a heart,
my blood beats with butterfly wings.
and they glow when i smile
or when my cheeks forget to blush.
in the place of the heart the butterflies took away.

so your smile-stained lips,
and my butterfly-tattooed skin
met under despair
when it was well
over
the brink.

and every time you tell
anyone that i'm yours
           the spaces between my ribs g l o w
           with the timid smiles
           of my blushing, trippy butterfly heart.
because i don't remember living without it.
and i think things are getting better.



for my oobie.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

At first I expected something within the likes of Langston Hughes, judging by the title. But this piece is much more transcendental than just racial contemplation, or even human beings as a whole. There's a wonderful vision being told here, entrapped in a beautiful absurd and surreal landscape. Hinting at an Eden, a perfect paradise for those who have had the pleasure of not being born yet. The constant whispering of the colourful creatures with their delicate wings.

Created with the likes of bold, large spacing and perhaps unnecessary italics. The execution of which can be seen as done by someone of ingenuity, but still with their heads in the clouds of youth. (I am to be blamed for this also.)

Finally, we can tell from the last few lines that, this, is a love ballad. That this glorious half-dream of birth is what simply shivers down the author's spine whenever she is able to proclaim her love. Not the most original, but still memorizing nonetheless.